There are other grammatical errors as well, such as the use of a semicolon in this sentence, and the mismatched verb tense:
Solich has done many good things during his 9 year tenure; including winning the school’s first ever bowl game and has kept Ohio decently competitive in the MAC.
...or the missing comma in this sentence:
The question is at nearly 70 years old, can his success continue?
One way to fix these would be:
Solich has done many good things during his 9 year tenure
, including winning the school’s first ever bowl game
, and
keeping Ohio decently competitive in the MAC. The question is
, at nearly 70 years old, can his success continue?
Another way would be:
Solich has done many good things during his 9 year tenure
, including winning the school’s first ever bowl game
, and
he has kept Ohio decently competitive in the MAC. The question is
, at nearly 70 years old, can his success continue?
I would agree that he is probably not a journalism student. Of course, I'm just some engineer, so what do I know?
Last Edited: 4/30/2014 7:35:13 PM by L.C.