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Topic: Muncie, IN: "We wish them the best going forward.”
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Jeff McKinney
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Posted: 3/28/2014 11:54 AM
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I applaud Coach Whitford for using creativity in his official verbiage.  "Future endeavors" has grown somewhat stale.
Brian Smith (No, not that one)
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Posted: 3/28/2014 12:11 PM
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First draft:

"We extend them our warmest thoughts as they embark upon this oft-tragic, sometimes uplifting larger game known as life. May they only know uncontested lay-ups. Good-bye, sweet princes."
Monroe Slavin
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Posted: 3/28/2014 12:21 PM
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"going forward" can be removed from every place that it's ever appeared and nothing would change.  Succinct = good.
Pete Chouteau
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Posted: 3/29/2014 9:35 AM
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The added words could indicate that we did not wish them well in the recent past.
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